Am facut si eu un cantecel.. Daca nu stiti engleza, dati la traducere pe Google : )
“I need your soul next to me”
“My little heart Will die without Your soul near to me Because I can be…
R.: Death without your love, I can`t fly Like a dove.. Your love can`t be in me, I think that you can see.. I can`t live without your soul Next to me.. Next to me..
Your soul froze my mind I lose what I’ll find Your waves of love Follow me like a dove And I have a little think.. That for you I am not nothing…
R.: I`m dead without your love, I can`t fly Like a dove.. Your love can`t be in me, I think that you can see.. I can`t live without your soul.. Next to me.. Next to me…
When the sun goes down And a star was found I can look around And think at you… Now I`ll find Just a little ground And I`m crying in the night ‘Cause I can`t hold you so high.. So high… So high…!
R: I`m dead without your love I can`t fly Like a dove.. Your love can`t be in me, I think that you can see.. I can`t live without your soul.. Next to me…
Needing your soul… Next to my heart.. Next to my… Heart…”
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E draguta, dar ai greseli gramaticale, destul de multe.
Dar nu o sa ma apuc sa le insir pentru ca poate esti si tu ca Nicole si te superi din prima
Gramaticale ?? Eu nu cred ca am Mi`a verificat`o un profesor bun de engleza si a zis ca e corect. But.. whatever Si nu, nu ma supar ca Nicole :/ Te`as ruga sa nu ma compari cu ea. Si sunt foarte curioasa care sunt greselile vazute de tine :-? Sa mi le zici cand mai intri.